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Canon
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Canon EOS 1100D
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1/100 second
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34 mm
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May 3, 2014, 4:57:34 PM
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Tonnerre  la petite venise5. by hubert61 Tonnerre  la petite venise5. by hubert61
pour le fun
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Nice capture of an image with a lot of interest. The choice of subject is wonderful and really tells a complete story. It is something that you just want to fully explore. You can almost smell the interior of the old second-hand shop. Each of the window panes is like the frame of a painting, isolating the objects into unique sub-compositions that each hold the viewer's eye. The reflections of the architecture across the street help to further the narrative and add depth to the sense of place. While I think it is a wonderful image, there are a few things that I think would have made it even better. First is the bottom of the composition, that just cuts off the bottom of the doors. all of the other edges of the wooden framing are included and half a step back would have also gotten the bottom door edge which would have made a stronger composition. Secondly, the brightest areas of the composition are the edges which draws the eye away from the center. Using software to burn the edges just a bit would help to keep the eye centered on the windows and objects where it belongs. Lastly, The photographer could have moved just a few inches to the right and better hidden the reflection of their legs in the door frame but this is minor. Overall a very well done photograph.

Scott
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:iconkeecee1:
keecee1 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Superb!
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
:)
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:iconcj-judd:
CJ-Judd Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student General Artist
what an interesting photo. Je l'aime beaucoup, je souhaite que je pourrais visiter cette boutique!
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
:)
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:iconsilverwynd:
SilverWynd Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool and interesting shot, though the dolls in the window do scare me a bit LOL.
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
merci :)
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:iconratolipiano:
RatoliPiano Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
I don't know why, but it has something special.
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
merci :)
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:iconninjaewapeach:
NinjaEwaPeach Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
This reminds me of "I Spy"... the old shop in the Treasure Hunt "I Spy" book! LOVE IT! 
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconcodenameaj:
CodenameAJ Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
I love this!!!! So very unique!!!!
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconnomnomcookie123:
NomNomCookie123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hacker Alert! :( Please read to be safe! Nice pic, by the way!
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconnomnomcookie123:
NomNomCookie123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:3
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:iconcameranut:
cameranut Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
An interesting composition vintage antiques .
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
:)
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:iconradioactiveraccoon:
RadioactiveRaccoon Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
This looks charming, but I can't help but think of 1984 and that old man's bits and bobs shop! I'm sure it's a brilliant place to find some treasure in though! :)
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
:)
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:iconkartmanrock:
kartmanrock Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Professional Photographer
fascinante. 
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Merci :)
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:iconbottled-mermaid:
bottled-mermaid Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Lovely shop, it looks so vintage and fun. Awesome colours, too :)
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Merci :)
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:iconndlevett:
NDLevett Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Interesting^^
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconndlevett:
NDLevett Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are most welcome^^
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
:)
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:iconsehe:
Sehe Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Superbe photo !
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconsehe:
Sehe Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Avec plaisir ^^
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:iconstarheartcustoms:
StarHeartCustoms Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Damn. Nothing creeps me out more than old dolls.
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconnikutsuki:
nikutsuki Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
The kind of store that would totaly caught my attention :D
Love this pic!
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconkagomeyusuke:
KagomeYusuke Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Charmant! 
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconkagomeyusuke:
KagomeYusuke Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
De rien! :relapsefive: 
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:iconrevengegoddess:
RevengeGoddess Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Nice photo!
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
:)
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:iconnortraz:
Nortraz Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Cool! :)
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
:)
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:iconmyronavitch:
Myronavitch Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Who wouldn't love to browse a store like this.  A fine capture.
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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:iconvaughanp:
Vaughanp Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Great photo.
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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bittersweet-ink Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow, very cool
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
:)
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:iconfrostyswirl:
frostyswirl Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Incroyable cette photo!
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
:)
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:iconk4nk4n:
K4nK4n Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Great job capturing the reflections. I'm so curious about those books.
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