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Canon
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Canon EOS 1100D
Shutter Speed
1/100 second
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F/8.0
Focal Length
34 mm
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400
Date Taken
May 3, 2014, 4:57:34 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CC (Windows)
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Tonnerre  la petite venise5. by hubert61 Tonnerre  la petite venise5. by hubert61
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Nice capture of an image with a lot of interest. The choice of subject is wonderful and really tells a complete story. It is something that you just want to fully explore. You can almost smell the interior of the old second-hand shop. Each of the window panes is like the frame of a painting, isolating the objects into unique sub-compositions that each hold the viewer's eye. The reflections of the architecture across the street help to further the narrative and add depth to the sense of place. While I think it is a wonderful image, there are a few things that I think would have made it even better. First is the bottom of the composition, that just cuts off the bottom of the doors. all of the other edges of the wooden framing are included and half a step back would have also gotten the bottom door edge which would have made a stronger composition. Secondly, the brightest areas of the composition are the edges which draws the eye away from the center. Using software to burn the edges just a bit would help to keep the eye centered on the windows and objects where it belongs. Lastly, The photographer could have moved just a few inches to the right and better hidden the reflection of their legs in the door frame but this is minor. Overall a very well done photograph.

Scott
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:iconkeecee1:
keecee1 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Superb!
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hubert61 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
:)
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CJ-Judd Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student General Artist
what an interesting photo. Je l'aime beaucoup, je souhaite que je pourrais visiter cette boutique!
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hubert61 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
:)
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SilverWynd Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool and interesting shot, though the dolls in the window do scare me a bit LOL.
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hubert61 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
merci :)
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RatoliPiano Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
I don't know why, but it has something special.
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:iconhubert61:
hubert61 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
merci :)
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NinjaEwaPeach Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
This reminds me of "I Spy"... the old shop in the Treasure Hunt "I Spy" book! LOVE IT! 
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hubert61 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
merci :)
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